Writing a short story - Webisode 1.

What we've got here is the beginning of the story the English and the French groups are writing in turns. It is quite promising although none of us know where all this will lead us!....Will you stand this agonizing suspense?

It was on a dark and rainy day. The river Thames could hardly be seen, it was covered by fog. We couldn’t see what was around us but something had happened.
The tower of London was closed and beefeaters were whispering something to each other. The ravens had disappeared…..
Suddenly they heard the sound of a little girl singing, « London bridge is falling Down ». She was nowhere to be seen but her voice drifted through the fog.
All of a sudden a scream broke through the mist and the mad cackling of the ravens could be heard.
There was a flash of light and…..